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Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

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Offline Stu Ayris Reading The Prophet by Khalil Gilbran
11 Aug 2012, 07:23 PM | Post: #11

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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

Just to say that, more than any other of my books, The Bird That Nobody Sees has scenes that really happened in real life. I guess with Ray, Danny, Alex and Little Jon being based on four of my mates I guess that's not surprising though! Whistle
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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

(11 Aug 2012 07:23 PM)Stu Ayris Wrote:  Just to say that, more than any other of my books, The Bird That Nobody Sees has scenes that really happened in real life. I guess with Ray, Danny, Alex and Little Jon being based on four of my mates I guess that's not surprising though! Whistle




In all seriousness, the male bonding parts turned out to be my favourite bits of the book. I absolutely loved the camping trip which was just so right and natural to read- I could just see my husband and his mates when they do their little male bonding things like surf trips.
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12 Aug 2012, 08:56 AM | Post: #13

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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

I know I can't wait for part three of the trilogy Stu, and I dare say Suzanne and Elaine feel the same. Smile

Come on everyone, join in the discussion, we are having a lovely party here, but would love some others to join in. Thumbs Up
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Offline Stu Ayris Reading The Prophet by Khalil Gilbran
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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

In all seriousness, the male bonding parts turned out to be my favourite bits of the book. I absolutely loved the camping trip which was just so right and natural to read- I could just see my husband and his mates when they do their little male bonding things like surf trips.
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Cheers Elaine! The paintball scene was based on my middle son's 16th birthday. And yes, I did what Rod did - jumping into the dank and dirty waters. Never did like to lose...

The Moon & Sixpence is a real place - I've been going there since I was about four with my parents. Spent the last week there with two of my sons, Little Jon, his fiancee, my wife and one of my son's girlfriends - and Benson the dog. While I was there, Little Jon read Tollesbury Time Forever. All very surreal!!
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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

I've sneaked in here but not read too much of the discussion as I haven't started this book yet. Whose ideas was it to have a book club during the Olympics.

And shouldn't the discussions start on the 15th? Or were you just too eager to get chatting on it.
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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

I found this to be a truly extraordinary book. Stu’s approach to writing is refreshingly different and the result is a unique reading experience.
He has again managed to combine the conventional ingredients of a novel (convincing characters and engaging plot) with quirky elements that kept me guessing, chatty asides as the author casually engaged me, the reader, in conversation and also embedded himself as a character referred to within the book – and the whole thing is done while carrying a moral message.
He’s not afraid to step out of the main plot and throw in passages that are beautifully written, often with a poetic quality.
One such passage at location 3224 left me stunned. It relates the thoughts of a care home resident with Altzheimer’s. How on Earth can such a young man capture the workings of an elderly person’s mind so movingly?
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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

I don't know what to say, Barry, except 'thank you.'

It's the kind of encouragement you show that gives me the confidence to keep faith in what I'm doing. I had loads of rejections for Tollesbury Time Forever and I'm sure I would for The Bird That Nobody Sees, but, to be honest, going it alone seems right for me.

The book was actually a joy to write - a homage to my friends and a way of me progressing the FRUGALITY ideas.

So thanks again, mate.

Really appreciate it!

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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

I think it's wonderful that some of the characters are based on your friends - what fantastic friends you have. Have they read the book and if so, what did they think of their alter-egos? I know that Little Jon has just read Tollesbury.

I thought the campsite must have been real and meant to look it up, but you've now told me that it is. We used to go camping - well, caravanning, when the children were small, to a small campsite in the Cotswolds and we all loved the simple life away from the hustle and bustle and the children could run free and mix with new and old friends.
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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

I'm not surprised about your books being rejected by traditional publishers - they'd be terrified by your subject matter, your style and your cross-genre work. They wouldn't have the first idea about how to handle it and I suspect you'd have a hell of a fight with their editors.
Don't worry about it. In time your sales and reputation will give one of them the courage to offer you a contract.
In the meantime your work is perfect for the KDP platform - as I've recently blogged at http://www.bjburton.co.uk/blog/

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RE: Bookclub: The discussion of The Bird That Nobody Sees (contains spoilers)

(12 Aug 2012 03:51 PM)B J Burton Wrote:  I'm not surprised about your books being rejected by traditional publishers - they'd be terrified by your subject matter, your style and your cross-genre work. They wouldn't have the first idea about how to handle it and I suspect you'd have a hell of a fight with their editors.
Don't worry about it. In time your sales and reputation will give one of them the courage to offer you a contract.
In the meantime your work is perfect for the KDP platform - as I've recently blogged at http://www.bjburton.co.uk/blog/

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Lovely blog post! Cheers!

Who knows what the future holds? I'll be 43 tomorrow and Tollesbury Time Forever only came out in January so I guess I'm very new at all this publishing lark. I have no idea what I would do if I was offered a contract. Doing things this way suits my personality and desire for all sorts of freedoms.

Rod will be free wherever he is, now that he has seen the bird that nobody sees...

Thanks again for the mention on your blog. Very kind!

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