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Dark Tidings sequel - please help with the blurb

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Offline lyndawrites Reading The Midnight Man by Paul Doherty
30 Jul 2012, 04:35 AM | Post: #21

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RE: Dark Tidings sequel - please help with the blurb

Hmmm. Just hd another thought.

Would it sound better if you changed it to:
"Saving the world just got a whole lot harder in this humorous romp through time and the Internet"? Or is that a bit cliched?
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Offline Ken Magee Reading The Testing of Archie Rathbone by Alex Hunter
30 Jul 2012, 09:27 AM | Post: #22

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RE: Dark Tidings sequel - please help with the blurb

Thanks again to everyone who helped... it is greatly appreciated.

I'm not quite sure about adding the 'humorous journey (or romp)' bit to the end of the blurb because I'm concerned that it detracts a bit from the drama.

I'll keep mulling it over... and I'm sure the publisher will have an opinion!
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