First Time Writer: 1900 words of Auto-biog. Would appreciate any commentary.
I have always wanted to write but never tried too hard, or have tried and then discarded it. But I would like to post something. Any kind of tip would be useful. For one I think I may change tenses from time to time. But anything that people can say without breaking my heart would be useful.
What I will show is neither the beginning or end or middle of a book. It probably would end up, after many drafts, as chapters, but I don't yet know where it would go or anything. It's just previously random typed out thoughts that I have shaped into something resembling a very amateurish attempt at auto-biography.
I have just read the rules and now I am not sure if I am allowed to post or offer up a full book. I only have 1900 words and don't know how to make them readable other than by posting them. I will go scout around.